Lukas Reinquist
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First name : Lukas
Surname : Reinquist
Race : Human
Self evaluation : Knight Of Love
Height: Six feet
Weight : 190lbs
Age : He appears to be in his early twentys
Skin Tone : His overall skin tone is tanned, as he ventures outside alot and is exposed to the sun
Skin Texture : Despite his life, his skin is very soft and not scarred at all
Eyes : Sea Blue Eyes
Hair : His hair is short, sometimes in medium length, always kept neat and tidy.
Voice : His voice is pleasant, and one of a prince
Accent : He has the accent of a fighter
Recognizable Features : His handsome face, groomed and clean hair and his always shining armour.
Commonly spoken languages : Among common, Lukas also knows Orcish
Equipment Worn : When fighting he wears: A plate (always shining) a longsword, a large shield and a back up dagger.
When he is not fighting he seems to wear robes of the finest quality, that are very tight and look quite warm.Equipment Carried : He carrys an arrangement of supplies, healing utensils, food, warmer clothes and other utensils.
Left Handed or Right Handed : Right handed
Jewelry or Decorations : He has nothing but a ring that is covered in diamonds and the richest gold.
Body Build : He is a tall, muscular man carrying very heavy loads at once, his figure saying alot about how hard his work is, he is Very toned and keeps himself in shape
Combat style : Lukas is always the first one to strategicaly plan the attack, not rushing ahead but planning at a seconds notice.
He grew up in a wealthy family, not needing the odd 50 coins to buy a new garment he would rather buy the garment that costs 100 coins, he was always popular with the girls around his town, he of course was the heir to the throne of "Ardent".
Ardent was a big city, where he met many people most of which only being friends with him because he had money and power, He didnt like being treated any differently then anyone else, he really just wanted to be the same as everyone else, then again he loves the money and power but he really wished he could just have friends that liked him for who he really was a sensitive, kind, very LOVING person.
He grew up learning many different types of combat, but over all he loved gripping the tower shield and gribbing his longsword. He never really liked using a bow. He excelled at fighting and was always the top of his classes, but the word going around was the only reason he was good is that he had money to get personal 1 on 1 lessons with his teacher, but this was not true he just was a natural at it. One of the first lessons he learnt was to keep all his armor and equipment clean, you will never see him without his armor sparkling and his sword not clean.
He grew up and finally he was about to become king of Ardent, when he fell deeply in love with a young beautiful Elven Woman. He's father shunned anyone that would marry another race of people, but he couldnt resist her and loved her too much, So he bought her a lovely ring cased in diamonds and plated with gold. He then proposed to her, an Evil commoner over heard this and Alerted the king and the king sent men to find his son. After hours of searching the men found him in an abandoned Mill, with the Elven woman by his side, he awoke as then men lunged at him with daggers. He jumped through the window and onto his horse, leaving the woman he loved behind and everything he knew, he has given up searching for her as it has been many years. He just wants to move on with his life, and find another sole mate.
He rode his horse as fast as he could it was not long before he was attacked by orcs, he was knocked off his horse, and lunged at aggressively by many orcs, as he said his last words all of the orcs, fell too their knees and died in agony. Lukas awoke in an old cave, he looked up to see a young elven man cleaning his armor, and feeding his horse. He jumped up and Picked up a log that was laying on the ground and started swinging at the Elven Male, He then shouted at Lukas and told him what had happened as the Elf told him he dropped the log onto the ground, and sat down Calm once again from then On he has always been friends with young elf by the name of "Xavier Wolfe"
When Lukas recovered, he did some adventuring Xavier and Lukas both arrived at the town of Jiyyd.
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Thanks heaps for your ideas - thinks of some traits -
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@11c0b452e8=Robyn:
I noticed you included no background personality, trade, likes or dislikes. When designing a character, the first thing I think about is how they grew up, how it would shape them, and then pick a name and profession. From the name “Ace Lonehawk”, I can only presume you want to be a Ranger, or multiclass derivation.
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So there you have it. Kegan Miller, known as “Ace” to his card playing buddies, son of Karle, son of Kyle, who grew up on the fringes of a city barely staying out of trouble. His living gave him numerous woodsman skills, and a fair start at being able to defend himself.
What he likes, who he is, and what he’s after I leave you to deal with. My lunch break at work is over
What Robyn said…
Also, as a side note: "English" isn't the language name you want to write down, "Common" would be that
If he's anywhere near narfell in origin, his home language would most likely be "Damarran". (Both of these are the free bonus languages...Personally, I'd start to give him traits, if I was you.
Good ranger traits are poking around with a finger in the nose, and then feeding that to whatever animal is near. You could claim it makes them more intelligent or something...
Just kidding!
Give him a unique way to eat, or drink. Say, if his family used to make coals from wood, living deep in a forest, they also face a constant thick smoke, so before he drinks he lets the drink rest and then makes the top of the water spill over on the ground. In his home that would be the most dirty part of the water...
Just ideas, really. Make up your own silly things!
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Also thanks for your input green
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Thanks for your input!
//UPDATED!
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Wow! thats perfect! thanks so much!!! I really love it…Thats heaps thankyou so much!
I'm still unsure about the name though, I have no idea about it.....
<----------------------Isnt good with names
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OK, I will take a stab at it, though I draw the line at drawing a picture.
Looking at the description, “Angel blue eyes”, “Tan smooth skin”, “Tall and muscular”, I would ensure that your character have a Charisma of 12+. Even if extremely introverted and mousy, appearance has some bearing on Charisma. Some folks neglect that stat, but from a player perspective try to take it into consideration, particularly for a romantic relationship.
“Tall and muscle bound” – Strength of 16+. There is a difference in my mind between “muscular” (14+), and “muscle bound” (16+)
The name – Actually, I don’t mind “Ace”. Yes it does smack of a B movie detective, but it’s not that bad. “Lonehawk” however, is very cliché. When picking a name, I find it easier to go with a trade skill. It’s often how names were derived. Smith, Cutter, Mason, etc. all came from the jobs they performed.
I noticed you included no background personality, trade, likes or dislikes. When designing a character, the first thing I think about is how they grew up, how it would shape them, and then pick a name and profession. From the name “Ace Lonehawk”, I can only presume you want to be a Ranger, or multiclass derivation.
So let’s start….
You grew up the oldest of three children, in a family that lived well past the outskirts of what would be defined as city limits. Your father owned a water wheel next to a fast running stream, and the locals would bring their grain to have it milled, and logs to have them cut. As the oldest, we’ll pick a hard, strong sounding name to go with the responsibility, “Kegan”, and a last name to fit the job “Miller”.
Your two younger siblings, both girls, had responsibility to help mom (Elizabeth, dad calls her Lizzy) around the house and small tasks for the mill, but the responsibility for the heavy work fell mostly to you, your father, let’s call him “Karle”, and his father, your grandfather “Kyle” (notice a pattern?) who also lived with your family. Your grandmother passed away when you were little, and your barely remembered her. Your grandfather never remarried, but enjoys spending a lot of time at the local pub playing cards and chasing women.
You could probably work the “Ace” in there somewhere. Perhaps at 16 your grandfather took you into town for your “first time” and you became fascinated with poker. Days at the mill, and evenings with your grandfather at the local pub. Your father ultimately disapproved, but you snuck away evenings anyway. Your father was perhaps a workaholic, and most teenagers are somewhat rebellious. Your grandfather might have presented a more colorful image and had greater stories to tell.
It’s what ultimately drove you out of the house, into Narfell.
So there you have it. Kegan Miller, known as “Ace” to his card playing buddies, son of Karle, son of Kyle, who grew up on the fringes of a city barely staying out of trouble. His living gave him numerous woodsman skills, and a fair start at being able to defend himself.
What he likes, who he is, and what he’s after I leave you to deal with. My lunch break at work is over
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Hm…soft skin, unmarked, angel blue eyes and young....Ace Bebyfayce?
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Please anyone if someone is available!
